Katlyn+BC2

Well the book I am reading is called __shiver.__ It is a great book and has dialogue that flows better then our story. If we compare the dialogue in order to make our story better then we would have to go back and re-do many of the conversations. Although the language maybe hard to understand we have the "propositions" or the indicators to who is talking and how they react which is a good start. The book I'm reading also has this and easy to know language, but it switched views between characters which, if you don't see who it is then the chapter dialogue won't make sense.