Tyler+BC2

The quest story I wrote has a very basic dialog. All sentences are basic, concise, and to the point. For example if a character wants something he says so in a very clear manner. There are no cryptic dialogs with hidden meanings in them. I don't think my dialog sounds natural at all because sometimes people don't state what they're thinking or what they want in a clear manner. Some of the dialog in my story could have been more cryptic to make it seem a lot more natural. I will be comparing the dialog of my story with the novel __The Age of Ra__ by British Sci-Fi-Fantasy writer James Lovegrove. This book has varied styles of dialog that sound very natural. There are period throughout the novel when the gods speak to each other in the heavens. The dialog of the gods is written in italics and they speak in a very archaic tongue. It is only natural that ancient divine beings would speak in an ancient manner. Also there are periods of insanity in the Sahara Desert and the dialog matches up nicely with these parts. The author use sentences and words that make it sound like everything in their world is no longer worth it, and the dialog matches very naturally.