Charles+BC2

The Dialogue from __The Dragonfly__ online book I read was more of a questioning from the main character with the polite, and some rudeness from the others within the story. The dialogue in the book did have this flow to it that actually felt as if a conversation was happening between Glen, and __The Dragonfly__ and others within the story. I felt as if the conversation was actually going on in my head and it was awesome. In the story __Linens Are Forever__ by Zach, Aaron, and I the dialogue was more of like a caddy shack movies humor, and sometimes random dialogue but without some of the flow. Our stories dialogue is fun, eventful, and makes you laugh but it lacks in some places. The difference between the two is that: __The Dragonfly__ is about this guy (who has no name, and people just refer to him as "Dragonfly") whose a human/dragonfly being locked in prison, and doesn't really understand whats left for him and of his race, and what to do if he ever breaks out from jail. Then our story which is just funny, ironic, and adventurous but lacks a little flow to the dialogue, it seems like we go off on different tangents not like an actual conversation is happening. What could have been better was adding more dialogue to are story, I mean it has a great deal of it. But it could have used more to make things flow better, and carry out some of the conversations to make them funnier, or more story heavy.