Mackenzie2012

I think this year I enjoyed the most the small group writing because it was easier to talk in the group and get your ideas in but your also working with people.

I think my best piece of work this year was writing the story of Sovantiums history because it was a long chain of events of one thing going to the next causing the next to the next and in it the good guy doesn't always win in it like in history.

I think I struggled most the year with trying to get my ideas in with the final battle because there are so many people trying to talk at once.

Over the year I Ryan changed from being a strategic warrior to a very violent person constantly wanting to resort to violence in the group quest to Arlen and than being a fighter and honoring those who fall in the final battle. I don't think there is much more I could have or would have changed about Ryan I liked how he turned out excepted for being frozen.

I suggest next year that there is more group work as a team instead of it being a Harry Potter type chain of command with the older veteran of the conflict than their friend who is next in line and than the grunts I found many students complaining about it being like that for it was a lot of the Shadow ad the Fox's stories that would be seen as the main stories.